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Adventure
Written by: Bwarch


     A thing beyond the horizon
         A thing scarcely sought after,
            Or remembered for that matter.
       A treasure worth more than mere gold
             A fantasy of those of dulled heart
   She calls my boy, from across the land she does
               Floating on the wind her call resonates
        She is a seducer of the unwise and the hopeful
            Her drink as that from the wells of memory
                               Sweet, sweet memory.
              Answer the call and drop into the unknown
                      Or stay and lead your own boring life.
                                  It matters not to her.
                         But rest assured, adventure is always there.
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Author's Comments

Hm, meh, no real description or insightful words here since it is 5 o' clock in the morning as I post this.

Comment and favorite and what have you.

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:iconnybx4life:
5 o' clock in the morning?

Woke up early?

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:iconflagist:
Now I don't quite get it whats the shape of the poem? Is it supposed to look like a road or something? Why is the poem on a slant?

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I want to raise my freak flag higher and higher and,
I want to raise my freak flag and never be alone.
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It was so pretty from way up there,
We talked about how the lights from the buildings and the cars,
looked like reflection of the stars.
:iconshadowslilfoamy:
ohhh its beautiful!
it just screams poetic expression of the upmost quality!
its passionable description of adventure as a tempting goddess of mystery and desire of the unknown destined to suck in the ones longing for the call of danger and the freedom that is adventure is just overwhelming!
great poem bwarch i love it!

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please listen to this. its one of my favorites. please.
:icondmdmal:
Just go along with it XD
Doesn't really change the meaning of the poem does it?

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:icondmdmal:
Dude...WHY are you up so late...err early? XD

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:iconflagist:
I guess not but I've noticed he does it alot...

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I want to raise my freak flag higher and higher and,
I want to raise my freak flag and never be alone.
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It was so pretty from way up there,
We talked about how the lights from the buildings and the cars,
looked like reflection of the stars.
:iconbwarch:
Stayed up late :p

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Always striving to improve and always studying the mysteries of the universe around us with curiosity.

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I'm a very, very lazy writer though...
:iconbwarch:
Indeed I do, and the reason why is because I find poems that just go straight down to be boring sometimes. So, to switch it up I'll add a certain effect to the stanza, sometimes I'll put words all over the place like in "V Part one" to signify an emotion or sometimes I'll even make it a picture like I made an hourglass in my poem "Life and Death" it's just to add a little zaz to my poetry.

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Always striving to improve and always studying the mysteries of the universe around us with curiosity.

Proud Shadow Legion member. Proud Atheist.

I'm a very, very lazy writer though...
:iconbwarch:
Long story short I'm trying to fix my sleeping clock by staying up as late as possible so I can get a good nights sleep the next night. :p

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Always striving to improve and always studying the mysteries of the universe around us with curiosity.

Proud Shadow Legion member. Proud Atheist.

I'm a very, very lazy writer though...

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