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7. Eternity
Written by: Bwarch
Part of the Hundred Theme Writing Challenge


                                  Like a shadowed specter it looms,
                         Rising above all with it's bricks of a dulled red.
                         In broad daylight it is darkened with despair,
                                   Refusing to succumb to the light.
                           Spawn of many roam it's twisted walkways,
                      These souls of the damned, yearning for freedom,
                        But forevermore forced to be within this prison.
                       With drawn faces these immortal people patrol,
                       Only time's end will free them from this torture.
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Author's Comments

A darker tone on eternity that I usually don't use and one I rarely agree with, eh. Btw, I think I might have described (partially) the asylum from Endzone XD

In any case, let the goose bumps be free my lovelies!

Comment and favorite and what have you.

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:iconmechanical-dragon:
Very dark...

....however it reminded me more of an old abandoned factory then an asylum of any sort XD

weird what the mind draws connections too.

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lol, yeah, I can actually see that one working though XD

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Nice one! :D

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Thankies :3

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I'm a very, very lazy writer though...
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No prob :D

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Very interesting. Nice poem BTW! :D

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